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This is really rough sounding. Almost like it was made with loops that don't quit blend well together. The female vocals are kind of gahy and the song just seems to loop over and over again.

August 20, 2008

Author's Response:

I am waiting for you to do better....

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Score: 6

"Repeats Too Much"

submission: Newammix(with quote)

date: July 3, 2008

After each drum build I expect the song to get more intense. It never did. :(

BUT, I really did enjoy listening to the easy going beat. Goodjob.

3/5
4.31 / 5.00 (- 0.075)

July 3, 2008

Author's Response:

cheers and noted. I know it just sorta loops after the initial build up and its been bugging me. I'm working on improving it since a few seem to like it. Perhaps try and make it sound a little more like I intended and less sci-fi heh.

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Score: 0

"Why is the stuff even on the 1st page..."

submission: Industrial Acid

date: June 28, 2008

I bought my friends 3 year old daughter a big toy piano for her birthday. This track mimics the sounds that came out of it when she played it.

I think the constructive criticism that you need is pretty obvious... spend a lot more time on your music!

0/5 - 3.97 / 5.00 (- 0.33)

July 17, 2008

Author's Response:

Again, this was just a test.

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Score: 2

"Fail"

submission: Marionette On A Shelf

date: June 28, 2008

The crappy poorly mixed techno completely fails to match up with the lyrics. Your trying to mix two moods here, and it doesn't work at all. The whinny soft lyrics sets a completely different tone than the actually music itself. This is a bad mix, and theres a reason why it's never actually done (often I guess).

You need to either completely do the sound and style of the lyrics, or the sound and the style of the song. Better luck next time.

2 Stars
1/5 - 3.86 / 5.00 (- 0.47)

August 20, 2008

Author's Response:

By all means, if you can come up with a better set of lyrics and such, please let me know. Record yourself and let me hear how good it can get.

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Score: 7

"a bit funk oriented in it"

submission: Juncture

date: June 28, 2008

This is a cool track. I liked it because it seemed to have a bit funk oriented in it. It was up beat and fun to listen to. I'd like to hear this something like this except with more of a darker beat to better fit the industrial sound.

7 Stars
3/5 - 4.31 / 5.00 (- 0.038)

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Score: 6

$** \ Death Ritual / **$

"spend 4 MORE hours"

submission: ** \ Death Ritual / **

date: June 28, 2008

This is a cool short track, but it sounds flat and almost like it was recorded in mono. I also do feel like this boarders more over towards Heavy Meta' than it does Industrial. Obviously you know what your doing, so I don't understand why you don't spend 4 MORE hours to obtain better mixing, clarity and even adding in some cool industrial'ish sound effects and maybe some cool dark synths.

Just to let you know, if you mention that you didn't spend a lot of time on making a song, I'm not going to give you a higher score. Theres lots of people here that spend a lot of time on there tracks, those are the people that I will "be fair" with. ;)

6Stars
3/5 - 4.32 / 5.00 (- 0.024)

June 29, 2008

Author's Response:

THanks for the very constructive review Tekcos. Actually this is my very first Heavy-Indusrtial song ... but you are right, the mixing is very bad. I will fix it and make a longer version.
But thanks for the review.
Check out my other song, I spent weeks on them ! Actually I made this song because i was bored.

Thanks : )